My own view on my animation is that I think it works really well, i chose a really hard song to match the words up and if i were to do it again i would of chose something completely different and easier to do, I also would have put the words differently, by this i mean i would have planned out another way or made the words larger for the camera to be able to see them clear, i would also plan how i would of put them across the paper which was my initial idea but as my computer crashed and the words kept on falling off, i needed the correct equipment to do that and unfortunately i didn't. If i were to do it again I would have bought some new blue tack and harder paper so it was easier to hold, I would of also desegnated areas for the lyrics to go just incase they fell off I would be able to put them back into the same place.
The feedback from my peers mostly said that I chose a really hard song to sync my lyrics up to, which if i new how hard it would be and how many lyrics i would need to print out and organise i would have changed the song.
One comment also said that the words were fairly hard to see, this is an example of one of the words that weren't as clear as I hoped it would of come out:
I could have improved my work by changing the song and making the lyrics more easy to read, I could have used a different website for the lyrics so it would be more clear to read, I would also change the way the lyrics go on to the screen so they aren't moving and are closer to the camera.
I have taken on board the comments that i received and i agree with them all, but i wont be changing my video as as much as i agree with them all as it was so time consuming i'm going to leave it how it is.
This is a similar video to mine:
I think that this video is alot more thought out than mine, I think that in this video the text is alot clearer which makes the video alot more easier to see, I think that she also used drawings which were alot neater than mine and alot bigger which visually worked alot better. The words also are clearer to see as they are bigger and carefully drawn out so the audience can view them easier. She held the pictures up straight without moving them which also helped too. Over all I think that this video worked alot better than mine did, as it is more easier to read and the words are bigger and drawn out which would of been a better idea for me to do instead of using the internet for it to generate my lyrics as i think thats where i went wrong, they need to be more clear.
If i were to do my video again I would change the lyrics completely from the 'ransom notes' to scrabble lettering
